Today I submitted my last work of this year. Before the submission, I felt little bit nervous owing to the fact thatI was afraid not to complete my research paper. Happy ending:) I finished it on time and submitted before 11.00 pm. I started to rewrite my essay at wednesday but because of the exams and the other homework, I cannot completely focused on my research project. Yesterday morninig I had an appointment with Sonja to get another feedback. This second feedback was helpful for me like the first one. It was a kind of guidence which lead me to write better final research paper. I divided my paragraphs into 7 sections to make it more organized and clear. I added 2 more sources which include the statistics and the story of Hanife. Sonja suggested me to use some statistics in my essay to make the essay more interesting and realistic. Then I decided to use Hanife because Hanife was a girl who was killed by her brother. So, the story can be a good example of my search. Also, I wrote more than the draft essay. I checked my grammer mistakes because I had a lot at my draft essay.

Also today, I send my i-research essay too. I completed all questions and tried to answer them clearly and honestly. This was my first experience with i-research paper. However, evaluating myself make me feel better. I can realised the difference between my first essays and the last essay. All in this period, I wrote essays and searched a lot from books and on internet. Now I can easily see the improvement.

Finally, this night when I go to the bed, I can sleep deeply and I am not planning to wake up early in the morning. I need to store sleep because I have exams next week but my homework, projects, essays, books finished. So many of my responsibilities finish until this time.